User:Marthagonzo/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Harry Styles

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I have chosen to evaluate this article because there is always misinformation being spread and always new changes happening with Harry Styles.

Evaluate the article
Overall, this article is very well written. It has extensive detail of his early life, career and his public influences. One of the points that I think should be expanded on a little bit more is his cosmetic company Pleasing. I think its important to highlight his efforts to make nail polish genderless. With releasing Pleasing, he has released various nail polishes, some skincare products as well as apparel. The article goes in depth on his career moves like acting roles like Dunkirk but briefly touches on Pleasing. I also would like to see more of his writing credits for other artists included on the article. He has written and been credited for writing songs for artists like Ariana Grande, Alex and Sierra and more. Overall, great article very detailed just would like it expand a bit more on some of the updated topics.