User:Marthagonzo/Scientology and celebrities/LilliBaldner Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Marthagonzo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Marthagonzo/Scientology_and_celebrities?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Scientology and celebrities

Evaluate the drafted changes
It didn't appear as if they've contributed anything to their sandbox draft yet, or bibliography, so I can't really analyze that, but something good they could add into the article would be John Travolta, Leah Remini, and Tom Cruz's involvement with this group. There was an entire series by Leah Remini and she talks to other former members of the Scientology church, so I think that would be some useful information to contribute to the article.