User:Martin Paskevicius/Facepunch Studios/Wacheli Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Martin Paskevicius


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * None available at the moment.


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Facepunch Studios

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Reading the current article that is published on Wikipedia, there appear to be very few things that need to be changed. The lead is good, you may consider adding any other current games that the studio is working on. All of the sections are nicely organized, so I don't think you need to change that. There is a sentence in the History section that needs an updated source, looking through what you currently have done, you may want to find that source. Looking at your Bibliography you have sources for a game that Facepunch is developing that is not listed in any section, that would probably be the past place to start drafting for this article. There is not much wrong with this article, it looks like it needs some updated sources and information, and you are already working on a new section for a game Facepunch is developing, which I think is what you should focus on the most. Any other edits that you feel need to be made is up to your discretion. Hope this peer review helps.