User:Martino.jeremy/Lee Ann Fujii/Neuscholar Peer Review

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The first sentence of the draft provides the reader with information regarding who the article is about (Lee Ann Fujii). The content provides the viewer with background information about Fujii, including information regarding how she saw political violence firsthand due to the internment of her parents during World War I and where she went to university. The article goes on to discuss her works and contributions, giving a good description on what each discusses; there is also the inclusion of a section with just the titles of her works.

The tone of the content is neutral, describing her life and contributions with no content that is intended to persuade the reader in some way.

The sources in the bibliography are reliable, and many of the sources are direct links to Fujii's publications. There are other sources that are journal articles looking into and analyzing Fujii's work. These sources in the bibliography that are not currently cited in the text are solid sources for continued additions to this new article.

The content is well organized, starting with background on her parents, then moving to her time in college, and then moving to her publications in chronological order.

There are no images on the article at this time. As the article is on Lee Ann Fujii, the inclusion of a picture of her could be an idea for how to add imagery to this article.

The article is a new one; the bibliography on this article does include more than two or three reliable secondary sources. The list of sources provided includes her own work, journal articles analyzing her work, and memorials for her. The article does a good job of providing links throughout to other relevant articles; for example, there is a link to the wikipedia article on the Rwandan Genocide when discussing that this was the topic for her master's thesis.

Since there is currently no page for Lee Ann Fujii on Wikipedia, the content added is very important and helpful. It provides a good overview of Lee Ann Fujii's life and work, helping the reader to learn about her background and literary contributions. To add to this article, an image of Fujii could be included. Additionally, since many of the sources in the bibliography seem to be other people analyzing her work, there might be information that could go towards making a legacy and impact section on this article.