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My name is Briana. I'm using Wikipedia as part of a project in my History of Psychology class. Hi Briana, This is Dr. d. I have evaluated your articles and following are my comments. Please select one of those I think will work and use it for your project. Good luck and let me know of any questions. Chris Hatcher (psychologist)-ok Norman Triplett-great!! Erikson's stages of psychosocial development--excellent Criminal psychology-not elated enough from a historical perspective. Forensic psychology is taken already. WebFlower1 (talk) 02:55, 2 March 2012 (UTC)

I will be editing Erikson's stages of psychosocial development. My three references are:

Slator, C. L. (2003). Generativity versus stagnation: An elaboration of erikson’s adult stage of human development. Journal of Adult Development,10(1), 55-65.

Studer, J. R. (2006). Erik erikson's psychosocial stages applied to supervision. Guidance and Counseling,21(3), 168-173.

Clark, J. J. (2010). Life as a source of theory: Erik erikson's contributions, boundaries, and marginalities. In T. Miller (Ed.), Handbook of Stressful Transitions Across the Lifespan (pp. 59-83). New York, NY: Springer Science Business Media.

3/9/2012 Outline and New Resources •	Beginning Paragraph •	Stage Chart o	Make sure to find sources for columns: approximate age, significant relationship, existential question, and examples. If no references can be found, delete the columns if favor of different ones. •	All of the following: Be sure each has sufficient examples and add existential question to the ones that do not have it. o	Hope: Trust vs. Mistrust 	Expand on topic o	Will: Autonomy vs. Shame and Doubt 	Expand on concepts of shame and doubt o	Purpose: Initiative vs. Guilt 	Removal of redundant sentence in second paragraph 	Expand on topic o	Competence: Industry vs. Inferiority 	General expansion of topic o	Fidelity: Identify vs. Role Confusion 	Removal of redundant heading of psychosocial crisis 	Possibly add link to super ego 	Content seems sufficient o	Love: Intimacy vs. Isolation 	Removal of redundant heading of psychosocial crisis 	General expansion of topic o	Care: Generativity vs. Stagnation 	Removal of redundant psychosocial crisis 	General expansion o	Wisdom: Ego integrity vs. Despair 	Fix age discrepancy between Care and Wisdom 	General expansion of topic 	Removal of redundant psychosocial crisis 	No citations present o	Development of Freudian theory 	Seems sufficient enough o	Value of the Theory 	Expansion as to the value to it had on psychology, as well as on society in general o	Critique 	Some expansion needed

New Resources/References Franz, C., & White, K. (1985). Journal of personality. Individuation and attachment in personality development: Extending Erikson's theory, 52(2), 224-256.

Meacham, J., & Santilli, N. (1982). Interstage relationships in Erikson's theory: Identity and intimacy. Child Development, 53, 1461-1467.

Just a few minor edits, little things like indenting paragraphs. The table of the stages looks great! Make sure you take out "strike outs" and red font as it is against Wikipedia policy. I know several students have been edited by outside users for these minor edits, myself included. It looks like you have everything on your check list crossed off! Congratulations!

Kayeedee (talk) 01:35, 31 March 2012 (UTC)kayeedee