User:Maryjwoo/Bancroft, Ontario/Pbergmann33 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Maryjwoo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Maryjwoo/Bancroft, Ontario


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bancroft, Ontario

Evaluate the drafted changes
The tone is balanced and neutral. The content is easy to read, however there are some grammar mistakes. The description on how to get to the park seems a little overrepresented. The sources are current and reliable, Ontario Parks is probable the most relevant and reliable source our there for this type of information.