User:Maryks/Samira Farouk/Dante0526 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

maryks


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Maryks/Samira_Farouk?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * is not currently published

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead - Great summary, however, I would like to see a picture if you have one to be added

Early life & education - I think you have done a great job with combining all the accomplishments in their early life, if it's possible are you able to add the dates to each award that they received as well as adding the dates of when they attended Princeton University. Another thing I want to mention is that you've used abbreviations for the degrees but later stated masters degree, I think it would be great to have the full degree and then keep the abbreviations in parentheses next to it (example - Masters Degree (M.D)) since some people are not always aware of what the abbreviations stand for. Overall it was easy to follow and concise summary for their early life and education.

Career - I've noticed you have referred to Dr. Farouk as "Farouk" a few times, I think it would be best to keep using Dr. Farouk through the page to keep consistency. But in general a great informative section for their current career path.

The rest of sections look great, in social media there's a spot where NephSIM isn't linked, so if you could add the link so that it's present on all of them for consistency. The rest looks great, the award section is easy to read as well as the select publications look great, and there does not seem to be a problem with the references, they all look good. Your tone throughout the page was neutral and had all the necessary information without having too much on there.