User:Maryna.summers/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Ren Yano.

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

I chose this article because for one, I am fascinated by the use of calligraphy; another reason as to why I chose this article is that, in another country, calligraphy is just as useful as it is where we live, in the United States. It's important because it gives you an idea on penmanship in a different country as well as the efficiency. My impression of the article was very interesting; however, I felt like more information could have been added to help me understand the calligrapher a little more than I supposedly do now.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

"In 2003 he obtained a permanent residence status as an artist for a special skill visa in Australia, and while teaching at RENCLUB, he is working to build a bridge between Australia and Japan through his large calligraphy performances, exhibitions, and personal exhibitions.[citation needed]

Although this article is straight to the point and very short, there are a few issues that arise. A citation is needed in the very beginning. It seems like a false use of information. Most of the information used in the text as a whole, needs more information and citations to give credit to the other sources used. However, the references at the bottom seem accurate and well represented.