User:Marythemuffinlady/Lake Kickapoo/Mariannh31 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Marythemuffinlady


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Marythemuffinlady/Lake_Kickapoo?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lake Kickapoo

Evaluate the drafted changes
From first over look it looks good. The hydrology and ecoregion are very well detailed. The water supply section is good too. I would just consider rewording the last sentence, so it would not use the word "although". Another sentence I would consider rewording would be the second sentence where the word "however" is used. Your lead is good and you remain neutral all through out the paper, which is good. I like the U.S. Naval Space Surveilance section. I see that references are not added yet, so I just recomend putting those. I think it would also be good to add some information on the type of animals and plants that live there. I know for me I just googled it and some information came up, but not all was credible, so you may have ran into the same issue. Lastly, all the blue words on your page work which is good. All in all it is a good wiki page.