User:Maryverplank/The Truman Show/PaulPisolino Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Meryverplank


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Maryverplank/The_Truman_Show?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The Truman Show

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I will come back and check this work later on in the week, as they are still working on compiling a draft.