User:MasaraFargo/Adoption and Safe Families Act/Ajdel Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MasaraFargo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MasaraFargo/Adoption_and_Safe_Families_Act?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Adoption and Safe Families Act

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * I like you addition to the lead, I would maybe suggest clarifying whether that was the intended effect of the law and what the actual impact has been.
 * It may also be good to include more of an overview of the rest of the article.
 * All of the content looks good and up to date.
 * Most of the information looks pretty neutral but you may want to add a couple comments about the opposition for some more balance.
 * Citations look good as well, you might just want to add notes by all the quotes to remind yourself of where they're from for when you do your bibliography.
 * There are also a few spots that from previous editors where you might be able to add links to other wiki pages (e.g. Kinship Care)
 * There are a couple spelling/grammar errors but they're easy fixes once you're able to proofread but your overall organization looks nice and is easier to follow than the original.
 * Overall, it looks like you made good progress adding new information and reformatting everything!