User:Maschristi/Agatha Bacelar/Brooke.baker873 Peer Review

General info

 * Maschristi
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Maschristi/sandbox

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * The article doesn't have a very clear lead
 * a few paragraphs of background
 * could do a better job of making a concise background paragraph as a lead

Content
Guiding questions:


 * The content is not focused on her work or her campaign
 * too much focus on her family life
 * must add lots about her political experience

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * the content was all neutral and balanced

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * There were no links or sources

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * The background could have been a lot more concise and put into just one paragraph
 * should utilize headers and sections

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * N/A

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * no
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * not exhaustive
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * none
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?
 * no

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Content should just be more focused on her work and not her family life