User:Maskewmo/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title: Cleanser
 * Article Evaluation
 * this article seems straight forward, but adding known ingredients in some cleanser will be helpful. Explaining to the readers which ones are good or bad. Explain how the cleansers work chemically, a good pH example. That information will helpful so reader will know what is happening to their skin because some cleaners has harsh side effects
 * Sources: ACS Omega 2021, 6, 4, 2906–2915, Aziz ZAA, Mohd-Nasir H, Ahmad A, Mohd. Setapar SH, Peng WL, Chuo SC, Khatoon A, Umar K, Yaqoob AA and Mohamad Ibrahim MN (2019) Role of Nanotechnology for Design and Development of Cosmeceutical: Application in Makeup and Skin Care. Front. Chem. 7:739
 * Sources: ACS Omega 2021, 6, 4, 2906–2915, Aziz ZAA, Mohd-Nasir H, Ahmad A, Mohd. Setapar SH, Peng WL, Chuo SC, Khatoon A, Umar K, Yaqoob AA and Mohamad Ibrahim MN (2019) Role of Nanotechnology for Design and Development of Cosmeceutical: Application in Makeup and Skin Care. Front. Chem. 7:739
 * Sources: ACS Omega 2021, 6, 4, 2906–2915, Aziz ZAA, Mohd-Nasir H, Ahmad A, Mohd. Setapar SH, Peng WL, Chuo SC, Khatoon A, Umar K, Yaqoob AA and Mohamad Ibrahim MN (2019) Role of Nanotechnology for Design and Development of Cosmeceutical: Application in Makeup and Skin Care. Front. Chem. 7:739

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Saponification
 * Article Evaluation
 * The leading sentence isn't very clear, but brief. The content of this article is relevant but the background chemistry should be explained more between the mechanisms. The viewpoints are good but underrated. Usually when saponification is looked up, readers want detailed information about sap.#, measurements, mixtures and pictures. That information will be very helpful to the readers because natural soaps are trending and readers are/will be interested in making soap. Fats are made up of fatty acids and the two sections are separated, combining those sections together and going into detail on fats and oils will help the readers understand what a fat is exactly. The oil paint section is good, but it isn't relevant to the production soap. The source aren't very reliable and some of them didn't work.
 * Sources
 * International Research Journal of Pure and Applied         ChemistryVolume21Issue14
 * Sources
 * International Research Journal of Pure and Applied         ChemistryVolume21Issue14

Option 3

 * Article title Oil cleansing method
 * Article Evaluation  The OCM is very important in the cosmetic world, this method is preferred more for treating/preventing acne. The viewpoints are underrated, and the article is brief. Background chemistry is missing( nonpolar, hydrophobic and lipophilic, and high in carbon and hydrogen count), explaining the difference in oils( being animals fat, vegetable oil, or petrochemical). Examples are missing, showing OMC for different types of conditions for blackheads, pimples, dark spots, etc. Maskewmo (talk ) 21:45, 6 February 2021 (UTC)Maskewmo
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Option 4

 * Article title
 * chemistry safety


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is straight forward. Adding types of proper lab equipment, the 4 chemical hazards: flammability, corrosivity, toxicity, and reactivity. Image and information of the NFPA diamond. Under "Accidents" a range of accidents should be given with simple solutions.


 * Sources
 * "Chemistry Safety". Science Buddies.