User:MasonFleming44/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Joseph Hekekyan

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I was immediately interested in what more work he did during his time. I was also interested in his archeologist section in his Wikipedia article because it didn't mention what he discovered. There is also not that many sources referenced in his Wikipedia article and I know that there has to be more information out there about his life and what he did.

Evaluate the article
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I feel like this article could be improved in his archeologist section by including discoveries he may have made.

I also feel like there could be a diagram or picture of his model villages added.

There are only 4 references as well and I believe there has to be more out there.

The early life section seems like it needs to talk more about his early life instead of just mentioning his education.

The article mentions that he lived "most" his life in Egypt but I'm wondering where he also lived and if he did anything in those other places.There is not much on the talk page.