User:Masonsplace/Sex and gender distinction/Ale g131 Peer Review

General info
Masonsplace
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Masonsplace/Sex and gender distinction
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Sex–gender distinction

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * In the Monique Witting section I could not tell the difference between the current article and the section in sand box.
 * Good expansion in Health Organizations section; good definition but needs a citation attached to it as well.
 * Article Body is just missing the citation numbers.
 * Put a comma before any direct citation.
 * Make sure not to have long run-on sentences.
 * update Lead section in sandbox