User:Master son/ACR Review Draft

Interstate 68

 * Comments
 * Lead Section
 * History
 * In Cumberland, the situation was particularly bad, as traffic exceeded the capacity of Cumberland's narrow streets. - No need to mention Cumberland twice here. It seems clear to me that if you put "as traffic exceeded the capacity of the city's narrow streets" that would be clear enough
 * The first corridor for the construction to be approved by MDSHA ran south of U.S. Route 40. - Define what MDSHA means on the first occurrence of the acronym (I noticed you spelt it out in the route description - leading me to think the RD was prior to the history before)
 * Route Description
 * Interstate 68 runs 112.6 miles (181.2 km) – 81.1 miles (130.5 km) in Maryland and 31.5 miles (50.7 km) in West Virginia – connecting Interstate 79 in Morgantown, West Virginia to Interstate 70 in Hancock, Maryland, across the Appalachian Mountains. - I suggest "spans" instead of "runs"
 * Do we need to spell out official route names (i.e. "Interstate 68") every time? Short-hand should work here.
 * Future Work**
 * Add future road to the beginning of this section
 * Can't see much else here - very good job. Just the few things and we're good to go.
 * Can't see much else here - very good job. Just the few things and we're good to go.