User:Mat280/sandbox

Mohammad's peer review

This topic was very well researched. It is clear and concise with chronological order and structure. The coverage is evenly distributed throughout the article with reliable sources listed and referenced. You might want to consider uploading some images to give others visuals of this subject. Visual aids definitely help with understanding this difficult information and make it easier to comprehend for anyone of any level or background. It's well covered, you did a great job.