User:Matchabae/Religion and alcohol/Its hard to make a username on this Peer Review

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 * Religion and alcohol

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 * Content
 * Consider separating each religious faith's views on the consumption of alcohol to improve the article's organization
 * Just as you've done for the Christian, Islamic, and Health sections.
 * Combine Paragraphs as information is redundant.
 * The following paragraphs, "Religion and Alcohol, as two fundamental...." to "...collectively influence the dynamics of this relationship" can be combined into one main paragraph.
 * The two additional paragraphs that are bolded underneath "Health" can be combined into one main paragraph.
 * Can elaborate on some sections:
 * For example,
 * However, the relationship between Islam, alcohol, and identity is multifaceted and influenced by factors such as cultural context, personal beliefs, and degrees of religiosity.
 * What do you mean by identity?
 * Sources and References
 * There are many claims that need to be backed up with evidence.
 * For example:
 * The changing viewpoint surrounding alcohol in Christianity.
 * In the mid-19th century, some Protestant Christians moved from a position of allowing moderate use of alcohol (sometimes called moderationism) to either deciding that not imbibing was wisest in the present circumstances (abstentionism) or prohibiting all ordinary consumption of alcohol because it was believed to be a sin (prohibitionism).
 * Needs citation.
 * Scholars and theologians have used this incident to argue that alcoholic wine existed in biblical times.
 * Needs citation, who were some of these scholars? What did they say exactly about the existence of wine during the biblical times?
 * The ruling of Islam forbidding the consumption of alcohol and why it is prohibited.
 * The complex interplay between Islam, alcohol, and identity has been a subject of exploration in academic discourse. It raises questions about how religious beliefs and cultural practices shape individuals' relationships with alcohol and, in turn, influence their identity.
 * Needs citation, because I have not come across any discourse surrounding the subject of the prohibition of alcohol.
 * However, they are permissible to drink up until the point of intoxication.
 * Needs citation, preferably from the Quran or a Hadith. Rulings surrounding what is permissible, what is alright, and what is absolutely forbidden are claims that require citations from a scholar, the Quran, or Hadith.
 * 'Anas ibn Mālik (أَنَس بن مالِك) narrated that the people said: "...some people [Muslims] were killed in the Battle of 'Uhud while wine was in their stomachs.' [...]
 * Needs citation.
 * Praise
 * Your use of scholarly sources and journals/articles is evident and aids to establish notability. Your tone throughout the article has consistently been neutral and does not favor any sides. Great job!