User:Matchabae/Religion and alcohol/Trisandejarnatt Peer Review

General info
Matchabae
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Matchabae/Religion_and_alcohol?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Religion and alcohol

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I really like your introduction it is very clear what your objectives and angle your are explaining your findings with.

maybe add an overview or link to major religion in the US as a background for American point of view on this topic. Having the religions you are likely to speak about may help prime the reader for what you will discuss.

Overall great job so far!