User:MathDementor/Siobahn Day Grady/Floyd919aa Peer Review

This was a well written article for Dr. Grady. While it clearly outlined a lot of her accomplishments, there was definitely more that could have been added. She is linked to many articles online that were left out of this response. For example, the Wiki posts shares that she was a 2022 Honoree of an award given by the Sigma Iota Omega chapter of Alpha Kappa Alpha Sorority, Inc. It failed to mention that she is also a proud member of the sorority. The content mentioned is neutral and does not show bias.

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MathDementor
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MathDementor/Siobahn_Day_Grady/Floyd919aa_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):User:MathDementor/Siobahn Day Grady

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