User:MathDementor/Siobahn Day Grady/Tecasm Peer Review

General info
MathDementor
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:MathDementor/Siobahn Day Grady/Bibliography - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The above link is the only one I found
 * The above link is the only one I found

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article has some very key information on the person of interest and started off with a good lead section that is easy to understand. In addition, the content has been cited properly. Some potential updates to the article would be to organize it in chronological order starting with the childhood of the person of interest progressing to current day. --~