User:Matisse123/Iphis/Kirke1221 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Matisse123


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Matisse123/Iphis


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Iphis

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

The lead is strong and straight to the point. Nice job on making the lead understandable and presentable. I would suggest adding at least one more sentence to add more to strengthen it altogether.

Article Body:

In the first sentence of the body the phrasing of the description of Ligdus is a little to story like, it would be good to refine it to create a more to the point sentence to describe the person. Otherwise, body is great, lots of information given in non biased way. The story flows and is easy to understand.

'''Reference: '''  I would add more citations if possible, adding citations is a simple way to add useful contributions to the article in a simple way. The digital database Perseus is a great resource to use.

Overall review:

I like how you took out what was originally in the article, I viewed it and it was sort of all over the place. So I think you did a great job updating the article. Overall I would say focus your final editing on adding citations or extra references so readers can have links and connections to this Mythological person.