User:MattAnthStudent/Human–animal communication/Rrami052 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MattAnthStudent


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:MattAnthStudent/Human-animal communication


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Human-animal communication

Evaluate the drafted changes
The sandbox draft is very detailed and the sentence structure flows consistently as if it were a narrative.

A few suggestions arise.


 * 1) Using words such as believe or likely leave room for open interpretation when information should be factual throughout
 * 2) possibly discuss difference in domestication and companionship as it seems to be a process
 * 3) Sources seem to be well used, but noticed some sources appear twice
 * 4) Your draft would fit in adding more on the section about dogs and adds a section on cats
 * 5) could talk about current human-animal communication such as SeaWorld or businesses such as PetSmart and Petco speeding up this process