User:Mattalee/Water, energy and food security nexus/Julesbarr Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I am peer-reviewing Matt Lee's article on the Water, Energy, Food Nexus.

REVIEW: I think that your writing is strong for the paragraph that you have added on "Criticism: section. I do not know as much detailed information this topic as you do, but it seems as if you are contributing a new discussion to this paper, which is good. I don't believe it to be unbiased and, in my opinion, what you are stating about the importance of temporal + spatial analysis is an important fact.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * LINK: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mattalee/Water%2C_energy_and_food_security_nexus?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * LINK: Water, energy and food security nexus
 * LINK: Water, energy and food security nexus

Evaluate the drafted changes
REVIEW: I think that your writing is strong for the paragraph that you have added on "Criticism: section. I do not know as much detailed information this topic as you do, but it seems as if you are contributing a new discussion to this paper, which is good. I don't believe it to be unbiased and, in my opinion, what you are stating about the importance of temporal + spatial analysis is an important fact.

After quickly reading the original article, it is difficult for me to say which additions or changes you need to make because I do not know the state of the research on this complex topic. If there is an abundance of research on the WEF Nexus, I suggest you add in an example of a real-world situation where the WEF Nexus was utilized. You could do this in the "Nexus Perspective" or "Nexus Approach" sections that do not talk at all about how this strategy has been applied in a country/region and if it was successful or not.