User:Mattalee/Water, energy and food security nexus/SarHasUCSC Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mattalee


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mattalee/Water, energy and food security nexus
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Water, energy and food security nexus

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

The Lead hasn't been updated to reflect the new additions, however I don't necessarily think it needs to be. Criticism doesn't seem like the most relevant in the Lead section since its role is to more define the topic. However, if you think criticism of the water, energy, and food nexus is critical to understanding the topic, then it could be good to mention that in the Lead.

Content:

I really like what you added to the Criticism section. It was pretty brief before, and you definitely expanded on it! I'm excited to see what you write for the "conceptual" challenge, and I think the "empirical" challenge is definitely relevant. It might be worth mentioning what compromises researchers make when interpreting the water, energy, and food nexus though. Nice job!!