User:Mattdwill97/Hydrogen sulfide chemosynthesis/KristinSefcik28 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mathew Williams


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mattdwill97/Hydrogen_sulfide_chemosynthesis?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hydrogen sulfide chemosynthesis

Evaluate the drafted changes
The body of the lead does not need to be bolded to match the bodies of the other key points. Work on the citations and cite them using wikis " button up top like i did for your Breusing, 2020 citation. Add Sogin et al., 2020 citation to your sources.

For "Miyazaki et.al., in 2020 also found that endosymbionts containing campylobacter species and a gastropod from the genus Alviniconcha oxidise hydogen sulfide in the Indian Ocean." Delete the source at the beginning and cite it at the end. What was found?

Overall you did a great job!