User:MatthewAYoung/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Vladimir Golenishchev

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
It seemed like an interesting article that has very little with it. I feel like I can make a major improvement to this article because of this lack of information on it and so I feel it's a good place to start at.

Evaluate the article
The lead section of this article is incredibly brief and really only says his name and that was an Egyptologist past that you can't really gleam any kind of information at all from it. It really feels like almost this entire article could be just the lead section of this article. To go off of this a major issue is the fact that the rest of the article feels like a lead section. Nothing about this article is really specific or goes into details it's mostly just talks about the artifacts that he bought and that's truly it. This article glances over nearly every other detail of Vladimir's life and even the parts that it does talk about are incredibly brief. For example it doesn't talk about any family life other that one sentence that mentions his father and I suppose that, that is an assumption that he really had a family life but still it doesn't talk about it one way or another. Another major issue of this article is citations the main life section doesn't use a single citation that isn't a link to another Wikipedia article and one of three citations that is does use the link no longer works.