User:MatthewBroadway/Anthrax/Brebre2719 Peer Review

In your first paragraph, you said that an Anthrax Infection can occur in "four forms", can I suggest changing that to " "it can occur in four areas of the body:". and possibly change the areas that say "skin form","intestinal form", or "injection form" to "the area of the skin will show signs of", "The respiratory system will present..", "the digestive system will be affected with..", and "the injection site will form abscesses, which could lead to fever".

In your second paragraph, the second sentence could be changed to, "prior to the initial description of anthrax, the virus was referred to only in historical accounts".

The third paragraph, I would change "animal products" to "bacterium's spores, are often present in animal by products".

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