User:MatthewBroadway/Anthrax/GardOU Peer Review

General info
MatthewBroadway
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:MatthewBroadway/Anthrax
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Anthrax

Evaluate the drafted changes
So far, what exists in the draft is nearly if not identical to the current article. Perhaps the drafted changes were already published to the article or no changes have yet been made, but if this is not the case, I would suggest re-writing this to avoid potential issues. The content of what is there is very well written, however. if anything else is added, I would suggest working on Epidemiology in other counties, or perhaps expanding the other animals section, as both sections seem smaller than the rest and could use some expanding. There are also a few spots where citations are still needed in the article, so a great way to improve the article going forward would be to attempt to find sources to fill in these missing citations. Overall, not a bad start!