User:MatthewBroadway/Anthrax/Jtownsend10 Peer Review

Anthrax is an infection caused by the bacterium Bacillus anthracis. It can occur in four forms: skin, lungs, intestinal, and injection. Symptom onset occurs between one day and more than two months after the infection is contracted. The skin form presents with a small blister with surrounding swelling that often turns into a painless ulcer with a black center. The inhalation form presents with fever, chest pain and shortness of breath. The intestinal form presents with diarrhea (which may contain blood), abdominal pains, nausea and vomiting. The injection form presents with fever and an abscess at the site of drug injection.

-You could be more specific about the incubation period

-I feel that the sentences describing different "forms" of anthrax could flow better with other vocabulary.

According to the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention in the United States, the first clinical descriptions of cutaneous anthrax were given by Maret in 1752 and Fournier in 1769. Before that anthrax had been described only through historical accounts. The Prussian scientist Robert Koch (1843–1910) was the first to identify Bacillus anthracis as the bacterium that causes anthrax.

- The citations of Maret and Fournier could be more specific, and could be linked to pages talking about them if possible.

- Maybe describe the "historical accounts" better in the final article

Anthrax is spread by contact with the bacterium's spores, which often appear in infectious animal products. Contact is by breathing or eating or through an area of broken skin. It does not typically spread directly between people. Risk factors include people who work with animals or animal products, travelers, and military personnel. Diagnosis can be confirmed by finding antibodies or the toxin in the blood or by culture of a sample from the infected site.

- The sentence about direct contact could flow better

- You could better define infectious animal products

Generally a good start to your article, see notes above and work on vocabulary choice and structure in general to bring your article to the next level. Also make sure all of your sources are cited when publishing your article.

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