User:MatthewStika/Emily Blackwell/NJSanta Peer Review

General info
MatthewStika
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:MatthewStika/Emily Blackwell - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think your heading in the right direction. The biggest help I think I can give is to try and add as much content as possible so when you do your final edits it won't remove as much information. Good citations and links. I also think that there should be more relation to the importance of your additions. For example, there is information on how she was inspired by her older sister, Elizabeth, but what about the others? Did they help out with anything or are their names known? Like I said before, its looking good just add more information to make the editing process easier and more beneficial.

Hopefully to give you some ideas, I was looking through the article and noticed there wasn't a section strictly for her achievement. Comparing it to other more known scientists, each of their articles has a section for this. I am unaware of the known information on her achievements, but it could be a good section to start and allow others to add to it in the future.