User:Matthewdrago/sandbox

Article Evaluation
For Bureau of Alcohol, Tobacco, Firearms and Explosives

Article on topic, relatively well written for a C class. Statistics for number of employees are out of date, and new official statistics are available It is noted in the talk section that there is no section for criticisms of the ATF, which can be very strong in the media, so that could be needed. On the other hand, the section regarding pre-2000 activity seems to be somewhat biased against the ATF.

Article Evaluation 2019
For Politico-media complex

The most glaring problem is original research. There are plenty of good citations - there is one statement in the first paragraph with 7 different sources alone - but there are many statements that are unproven, appear to be original research or are not objective. This is not spread out - it seems to be in clumps, small sections of the article rather than evenly spread out. This suggest that the article could be fixed with some effort rather than scrapped completely, if one were to edit the problematic statements. I added a citation for the effectiveness of television influencing american politics where before a citation was needed.

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