User:Matthewnoid8/Dace Kidd/Vanilynnrenee Peer Review

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(Matthewnoid8)
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Matthewnoid8/Dace Kidd - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):No existing article

Evaluate the drafted changes.
You have a good amount of information down but there is still some information from your sources that you could add. First, I would work on sentence structure for your leading sentence and the sentence that says, "more specifically". Maybe reword it directly.

Then I would add a few pieces of information I found while going through your sources. Such as including that she got her Bachelor's of Art at Latvian Art Academy first then went to Accademia di belle Arti Palermo after. As well as include she is the owner of Mural Art TX as stated in your first source. I would also add more detailed information on her type of medium and the sizes of the murals Kidd creates.

Including more information on the locations where her murals in Tyler and her solo shows in Europe would strengthen the article more and add more length. There is also information on her personal life, like her father and her husband within your second source, which could add another section of "Personal Life". Adding images of her murals would also be a great addition to the article.

Other than that, you have done good work collecting your sources and compiling your information into a great start for this article.

Second Peer-review
You've improved the article since my first review, including more information as well as the information I suggested. The artist's career section is better as well. I notice though that your punctuation in a few sentences is on the other side of the cite number. I believe it goes immediately after the sentence and then the cite number sits after it. I could be wrong though. Good job listing the shows she was in; do you happen to know the curator of these shows? Or any other information from these shows that could help lengthen the article. But other than those few fixes, pictures of both Kidd and her work will strengthen the article as well. Good job.