User:Matthewvetter/Indiana university of pennsylvania/Matthewvetter Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Matthewvetter


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Indiana University of Pennsylvania


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Indiana University of Pennsylvania

Evaluate the drafted changes
My feedback:

Good job on this overall. I appreciate the types of sources you're using. you might reconsider the .com or the blog source.