User:Matthiggins10/Medium theory/Dutchstudent2608 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Matthiggins10


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Matthiggins10/Medium_theory?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Medium theory

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that what you added in the sandbox to what was originally already in the article is good and adds something useful to what was already there. It's also good that you substantiate that what you added with a scientific source.