User:Matthiggins10/Medium theory/Robinsonmaddux2000 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

matthiggins10


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Matthiggins10/Medium_theory?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Medium theory

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead has not been updated, I think it could be updated for a quick introduction of the topic for someone who doesn't know what medium theory is.

The content that is there is good, I like how you started out with a quote and introduced the topic with a book. There is some content missing, like a history of medium theory, an introduction/definition of the topic, and a conclusion.

The content added is neutral, there aren't any argumentative pieces in anything.

The tone is neutral, however McLuhan's material seems to be the only thing referenced within the article.

There is only one source, which seems to be a book that is not mentioned within the text. I'd like to see a reference for McLuhan's book.

There are no images, maybe include one of McLuhan's book?