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T. J. Watt

The wiki article on American Football player TJ Watt while educational, skipped out on a lot of details. The largest being his personal life interests and involvements out of football. While football is his career, i also believe the writers could have done a better job adding more information about his struggles in college and in the NFL, instead of just the success and accolades he has acquired. Also, in the introductory paragraph the writers decided to include the names and teams of his brothers where i feel this information is irrelevant in the introduction paragraph. There should be a secondary section regarded to family life and family success where the writers could have included information about his brothers and their individual success. More could also be included on how he works to stay where he his today. it takes a lot of work to be successful in the nfl and T.J. Watt has proven he has the work ethic to succeed. The article could also benefit from sharing his relationship with each brother and how they have influenced or helped each other grow as players over the past 5 years.

Watt's wiki talk page was very dry and not many people had things to add or delete but the one thing that was on the talk page was where someone deleted and early picture of Watt.