User:Mattsoml7031/Opioid epidemic/Carriefish2021 Peer Review

Opioid Epidemic

 * The page is not pleasing to the eye. I like that they have websites that you can go to for more information. It would be nicer if the info was right there on the right.
 * There are over six websites in the beginning which is a lot and make me not want to click on them because there is way too many
 * The first sentence in a way doesn’t make sense because it feels like you are missing a paragraph before that talking about other populations affected.
 * Maybe in the first sentence do not use the word “hooked” because to me that sounds a word you use more for something that is good, try addicted.
 * The sentence that starts with “For teens the use of opioids usually does not start as a pain management drug... “ there is a part where it says teens will engage in drugs as recreational drugs. Try something like teens use opioids as recreational drugs, instead of what they are supposed to be used for, pain management.
 * First sentence of the second paragraph just need “at a heightened risk” instead of “at heightened risk”.
 * In the first sentence of the second paragraph the “but treating opioid use disorder in this population..” doesn’t really make sense because you led with talking about not only are youths at risk so the but part should be about other people who are at risk.
 * The second paragraph can be about how teens are harder to treat then adults but then the first sentence needs to be changed completely.