User:Mattydubsonly2004/Nutrition/Bellamarciano Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mattydubsonly2004


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Nutrition


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that this is a good draft and has some very strong points made in it. I think that all of the information is relevant to the topic and there is no information that is added that does not make sense or fit into the article. The information is up to date. The article is also very neutral and is not bias on one side or another. The sources are relevant and are able to support the information within the draft. The references also look good. I think that the article is some what under detailed, I think there could be a little bit more information. The content is easy to rad and understand and it makes sense. They are broken down and sectioned well. There are no images added to the draft. The article link does bring you back to the original article. I think that this could improve by adding a picture and adding a little bit more detailed information. Other than that I think that this draft is good.