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Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title: October–November 2021 Sudanese coup d'état
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 * Rated C-class article, Lead Section: No good intro sentence, overly detailed at times, no outline of sections to follow Content: Section headers are a little wordy and could be more concise, content needs more detail in several areas, little from view of Sudanese Tone: Slightly biased against the coup, much more information on killing on civilians and resistance to the coup than elsewhere  Sources: some links don't work, all english language sources, almost all newspaper articles  Organization: grammar is technically correct but awkward at times, section organization is a bit scattered  Images: Only two images in the article, one is a portrait, needs more images of the actual coup or perhaps Sudanese military and protesters  Talk page: discussion around images in article (lack thereof) and moving the article's category classification  Overall: On the whole a fine page, but could certainly use improvements, particularly in including more local sources to make it a more balanced page that incorporates reporting from Sudan and a non-Western perspective, organization could also be improved for the sake of clarity.
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Option 2

 * Article title: 2011–2013 Sudanese protests
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 * Rated C-class article, could add more context, more about international response to the incidents, more about detained persons and their treatment, protest timeline could use some reorganization, some information in the background section is out of place or not discussed later
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 * Article title: 2011–2012 Mauritanian protests
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 * Not too many references, could add needed context to the topic, this topic is very overlooked so could help shed light on it and how it fits into wider Arab spring as well.
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