User:MaxD02/Laboratory glassware/Ankithj Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
The content that was added was well written and adds relevant details on the history on glassware in laboratory. It gets a little off topic with too many details on the history of glass making in general rather than focusing on laboratory glassware because that is what this article is about. I think the information about the origin of glass making could be made into one concise paragraph, so the focus is not taken away from the laboratory glassware.