User:MaxD02/Laboratory glassware/Chasew2000 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MaxDO2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MaxD02/Laboratory_glassware?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Laboratory glassware

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

So far the edits to the article that have been made are worded very well. The only real suggestion I have is to possibly make the wording a little easier to read. In the second paragraph a work was mentioned "Chemical Manipulation", if a link or source could be added to this section that would be good.