User:MaxD02/Laboratory glassware/Sweiler99 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MaxD02


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:MaxD02/Laboratory glassware
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Laboratory glassware

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think that the additions are relevant, concise, and easy to read. I also think that they are valuable additions. The only changes I would suggest would be to add a sentence or phrase about what chemical glassblowing is, and maybe a sentence about the significance of standardizing chemical glass. Otherwise, I think you've made some great additions!