User:MaxRahim

Poetry. Poetry is more than an euphony,it is so lyrical and basically can change humanity. In our own perspective humanity should reflect on the doings and the undone. We force and fight,saying that all is fine whilst we undermine the basic surpassing spiritual teaching s in poetry.

I'm with you alway's, I'm with you always when you suffer, When they humiliate and defame you, When they talk ill and make you cry, When they rob ya and say they love ya, When they are the gentle thief that use your function for their rise, When they say they are with ya whilst you are on the lone, When you have non to comfort your thought's and make ya happy, When creation fight's for you and they push you over and over, If you loose your stand they come and push you over and over, I'm with you when you stumble why look for them? They are hell for you and still pursue them, I love you that is why you're alive, Love me to love you I'm the Creator and not a creeping creature, I'm more than a prophet, more than suffering, more than a soul, I'm more than a bliss for I predestined to see you alive, Love me to love you and reveal your essence to humanity so praise me to love you.

Comment:Weird that you talk of god as from him. Daring. And weird the opposition of factors like suffering and love, but must be true in life. Suffering. I like my idea that suffering is like weather, starts maybe somewhere and goes around. Makes the West somehow understandable in that there is too much suffering here and maybe because of our dealing in it, out of it around about, How do we live the fact of all the suffering the West has caused? Wasn´t me who dunnit. They were coincidental nutters. If not us then someone else. Just so much too hard to understand. God is life, love, life, growth, love, and all the bad stuff too is a part of life, just a part, nothing to do. I dunno. They talk of responsibility nowadays and the natural of going after ones heart´s desires, but me I wanna know, I want some more answers and discussion of world events, history, everything. I want to be able to know something especially when they all talk of knowledge and information and education. To know for sure to have all my doubts thrown out of court, proved wrong so that I know what´s what. Is that too damned much to ask. Just simple knowledge. Transparency they say. Ha. Darfur. The last 500-1000 years. Does anyone know why Rome went down or Egypt? I don´t think so. Maybe it was just a word that got out and about, that made sense and thereby the other stuff nonsense, people´s support turned. Not hard right now either, The sides are drawn tightly up, or are they. Governments of Europe are tied half and half. No defining, but the power goes to the winning party, This obstacle blatant. This era of technology has to sway for the people, humanity. What is life with technology and no humanity. Humanity been a long time under way. What is progress without peace but with too much suffering. Money in the bank, behind guarded walls. Anyway thanks for the inspiration.

Great poem must come with new vibe,sayings and language use. new sign's the new sign's are coming, those who refused to give you true love will suffer, these are the sign's that they all lied, your time to rise is come, these are the sign's of the time's, that all the destination of man is on the lone, now I know, I've seen with my eye's, That the suffering is many, The negation persist's, But we love and fight for our right's on earth, The value of man is to love and to be loved, Share the brotherly love to those who love sincerely, The sisterly love to those who love all of us sincerely, God love us to love all creation's sincerely, All we do on earth let it be done with no bribery, But with long suffering, It all makes the gentlemen and ladies.

Comment:Goldy Locks Comment: from a babe from the City of Brotherly Love, this rang true for me.

but just wasn't crazy about your last sentence, Maxy.

Poetry hast that taste of infinity,whilst the Man of genius is revealed,why should we waste each a single creeping being talents?