User:MaxW795/James Monroe (computer scientist)/Depo808knee Peer Review

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(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.) During the second paragraph in the "Careers" section you discuss an achievement he earned in the Air Force academy, I suggest you add that to the "Awards and honors" section because it fits under that heading. Also consider adding more AAAWUBBIS sentences in. The sheer amount of information you gathered is amazing, great work!