User:MaxW795/James Monroe (computer scientist)/Gregorymess Peer Review

General info
MaxW795
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MaxW795/James_Monroe_%28computer_scientist%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MaxW795/James_Monroe_%28computer_scientist%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
I liked how he maintained a neutral tone throughout the page. Providing plenty of insights into James Monroe's whole life and career. I will say however, the format looked a little boring throughout the "career" section. Overall the article using strong vocabulary, which to readers, makes them feel secure and that the article was written by an intellectual.