User:MaxW795/James Monroe (computer scientist)/Sdang05 Peer Review

General info
MaxW795
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MaxW795/James_Monroe_%28computer_scientist%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article is well-organized and easy to read. It is broken down into multiple sections that have relevant content. I am impressed with the amount of information found for this person in particular. The article does a good job establishing context about Monroe's life. It has a lot of information about his personal life and a very detailed description of his career. The only suggestions I have are to use more AAAWWUBBIS phrases and to consider removing the phrase "dedicated public servant" to avoid bias. This phrase is not heavily biased, but removing it could avoid that suggestion. Despite this, the article is very neutral and objective. It was concise and infomative.