User:Max Vestappen/Chinchilla/全瑕五百出 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Max Vestappen


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Max%20Vestappen/Chinchilla?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Chinchilla

Evaluate the drafted changes
His content is highly-related to the topic, and no content is missing. The content added is not very up-to-date, but timeliness is not important here.

The tone is quite neutral and there are no claims or viewpoints in it. And the article did not attempt to persuade its readers.

The content is backed up by highly reliable secondary source, and welly-reflected the source. The sources are not very current though. All the links are working.

The content is well-organized. It is not very easy to read though. Not because of the writing, but the content is very academic. There are no major grammatical and spelling mistakes as well.

No images are added to the article.