User:Max Vestappen/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Sebastian Vettel


 * Article Evaluation
 * Since Seb will not race in f1 anymore, much information need to be updated. Some honors he made should be fixed because he will never create records. Many verbs should change into past tense for his retirement. The photo shown on the website seemed to be a bit outdated. It showed his photo shot in 2015, still staying at Ferrari, but now he was in Aston Martin in 2022. I think it was not hard to replace the latest photo instead. The info was very neutral and introduced his early experience and the records he obtained. The only evaluation is that "he was one of the most successful drivers in Formula One history." This is correct because many interviewers and other authentic drivers also remark on him like this. Since it was a kind of particular sport combining people and machines, it must have some terminology that needs to be explained. I think all the links below are working and very precise. It lists all the brands of manufacturers and every world champion engaging with Seb. After reading the talk there, it was pretty interesting that people argued about his photos. Even though someone noticed that the latest one showing there was in 2019 without a team suit, maybe we can make it perfect in the future.


 * Sources
 * F1 official website, F1 TV, Sky Sports

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Cyberpunk 2077


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article briefly introduced the background information and production company of the game. It focuses too much on its commercial development, marketing, and release but not the story in the game itself. It mentioned, "Players assume the first-person perspective of a customizable mercenary known as V, who can acquire skills in hacking and machinery with options for melee and ranged combat." However, it did not discuss why players need to do that and the theme under that social condition. The most exciting thing is that the passage did not mention any other characters except V. Also, there are lots of plots missing here. "The story follows V's struggle as he deals with a mysterious cybernetic implant that threatens to overwrite his body with the personality and memories of a deceased celebrity only perceived by V." Actually, the celebrity who was a legend in the Night City had his name. It was pretty general to introduce the game in this way.


 * Sources
 * Cyberpunk 2077, CDPR offical website

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Gundam (fictional robot)


 * Article Evaluation
 * It can be tough to write this article because this was tricky. Gundam series have already been released for more than 40 years, but according to the setting, all the robots in different series all called Gundam. It was impossible to introduce all of them. This page is doing the same thing: it just raises the first Gundam robot RX 78-2. However, people who did not watch these series animations will be confused when seeing other robots, also called Gundam, with different numbers. Maybe we can add some links to lead the readers to see others with different numbers or codes.


 * Sources
 * Wikipedia, Gundam Wiki

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