User:Max Vestappen/Evaluate an Article

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Sebastian Vettel

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
He is one of the greatest Formula 1 drivers in history, but he announced that he will retire at the end of this year, which means he will leave the Paddock he loved.

Evaluate the article
Since Seb will not race in f1 anymore, much information need to be updated. Some honors he made should be fixed because he will never create records. Many verbs should change into past tense for his retirement. The photo shown on the website seemed to be a bit outdated. it showed his photo shot in 2015 still staying at Ferrari, but now he was in Aston Martin in 2022. I think it was not hard to replace the latest photo instead. The info was very neutral and basically introduce his early experience and the records he obtained. The only evaluation is that "he was one of the most successful drivers in Formula One history". This is correct because many interviewers and other drivers with authentics also remark on him like this. Since it was a kind of special sport combining people and machines together, it must have some terminology that needs to be explained. I think all the links below are working and very precise. It lists all the brands of manufacturers and every world champion engaging with Seb. After reading the talk there, it was quite interesting that people argued about his photos. Even though someone noticed that, the latest one showing there was in 2019 without a team suit. Maybe we can make it perfect in the future.